‘Help Hope take Flight’! Whoa, this is confusing. Is ‘Hope’ the woman in the picture? Is she actually trying to fly a bird? Somebody stop the mad goose before she does herself an injury!
Ambiguity aside, I’m still unconvinced that a picture of some distant starlings is going to have the donations for @rspbengland pouring in. I get what they’re trying to do and I’m supportive, but a murmuration is more of a ‘smudge’ when distant and static like this, and the copy doesn’t really explain why ‘hope is lost’ and donations are needed. Couldn’t we just revert back to some pics of injured birds or something? Nobody can resist a fluffy chicklet dipped in crude oil.
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Mmmh Chicklets in Sauce – Tasty.
I love me a chicklet
When you’re critiquing copywriters but yourself using the tautological ‘revert back’?
2 stars
Two stars is generous
I can see why you ‘left’ the comedy biz. Are you a Windows Admin now?
Windows is basically a comedy already without my help.