Brooks

My what a big strapline you have Mr @brooks !

Everything else about this advert is fine. Clear product shot, chunky branding, a sense of dynamism. But then there’s this whopping clunky strapline that has about ten words too many in it.

Personally I’d have gone with just “running redefined” but any of the three subclauses would work. You could even run multiple variants within the campaign if your boss desperately can’t let go…