Nobody will read the details of this advert. There needs to be a compelling reason written in big letters to read all those things written in tiny letters. And “Starting Lineup” is not doing that job – it’s utterly meaningless as a way to draw me in. “Did you hear about that amazing new software with the ‘starting lineup’?”. Said nobody. Sorry @myguavabusiness I’m sure it makes sense within your wider campaign, but it needs to make sense as a standalone ad too. ★★☆☆☆
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