Oh please god no, it’s another “describe the features not the value” advert from @square . The target market (restaurant managers) is unlikely to get aroused about things like “software” and “hardware”. Tell them why they’d want this. Half a point for “payments” which gets us some way there. And what’s with the photo? Maybe the original vision was “cool and candid”, but it comes across as a confusing accidental mess that you found in your mate’s “Deleted Photos” album. ★★☆☆☆